Letter to a soldier by Joshua

Dear Mr Henry Atkins

I am writing this letter to you to say thank you for signing up to be a soldier In the First World War and also thanking you for trying to protect our country in doing so. I bet when fighting in the war you saw some, or many horrendous, sights as a young man? I also bet you lost quite a few friends and comrades fighting at your side?  We will all remember and thank them for all they have done for us in our country.    

I am sorry to hear you lost your life fighting for our country in France and that you died so young at the age of 29. I will remember you every Remembrance Sunday and all you have done for us and your comrades also fighting for our country.

Yours Sincerely

Joshua