Saturday 30 June 2018

William and Zach- a dangerous adventure! by Alycia


   Willie and Zach were playing in Mr Tom’s garden (as usual) when they started getting really bored. It was a hot beautiful day with not a single cloud in the sky. Zach said, “I’m getting really bored Will, are you?” Willie shrugged. “I will take that as a yes!” Zach said excitedly, “I heard there’s a corn field a few miles away do you want to go?”
Willie shrugged again, “We should ask Mr Tom first,” he said shyly.
“No, we don’t need to. I will take the blame if we get in trouble.”
“um o….ok.”
So, with that they started on their journey. it had only been a few minutes when Zach and Willie were sweating like pigs. They had never been so exhausted. They eventually reached the corn field.
The field was big and yellow. They ventured into the field.
“We are like explorers venturing into the unknown.”
 “Uhhhh yeah,” Willie did not know what an explorer was, but he went on with it.
“WHAT IS THAT! Weird vegetable yellow stuff,” Zach said confused
“I dunno”
Zach picked it up
“It looks like sweet corn!”
“It can’t be, where is the tin?” said Zach.
“yeah”
The boys were staring at the corn they were clueless of what it was. Zach said nervously, “Shall I eat it?”
“I dunno.”
“I’m sure its harmless.”
After a short discussion Zach decided to take a bite, “HERE I go!” he took a huge bite out of the sweet yellow corn. “YUM!”
“Is it good?” Willie asked eagerly.
“YES.”
“Take one Will.”
“uhhhh ok”
Willie took the greenest most unripe corn and took a huge bite
“n………..ooooooooooooo Will oh too late.”
Willie spat it straight out, “Zach it’s disgusting!”
“I did try to warn you Will it wasn’t ripe.”
“ugh”
Willie felt himself blushing with embarrassment. The boys walked further and further into the field, it was getting really late. It was silent in the field all you could hear were owls hooting and mice squeaking. Meanwhile, Tom was looking all over for Willie and he was getting worried, “WILLIAM!” “ZACH!”
But there was no sight of them anywhere.

“Zach we better go now Mr Tom will be worried.”
“OK then goody two shoes!”
They started the walk back home when they saw a mouse, “AHHHHHHHHHHHH!” screamed Zach - he sounded rather like a girl.
Zach climbed a skinny tall tree.
“Zach it can’t hold your weight,” shouted Willie. There was a high-pitched screech as Zach hit the ground falling on top of his arm with a loud crack.
“ZACH!!!”
“OWWWWWWW!”
Zach screamed and then there was silence, “ZACH!!! WAKE UP PLEASE!!”
But he didn’t move.
“I’ll get a doctor don’t move.”
Willie ran faster than he ever had ran before. He ran all the way to the hospital and ran through the doors screaming, “I NEED HELP!!!!!”
Nurses came running, “What’s wrong are you hurt?”
“N……..n…..no it’s my …….my friend Zach!”
“OK where is he?”
“In…in the corn field we need a doctor.”
“OK I’ll get him straight away!”
The doctor entered the room and Willie and he got in the green ambulance. When they got there Mr Tom was sat right next to Zach looking really concerned. Willie ran out the ambulance and threw his arms around Mr Tom’s neck. “It’s OK Willie.”
The doctor ran up to Zach and listened to his heart, he wasn’t breathing.


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